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    Echoes Of The Past

    green moss, low fog dawn
    windswept breeze through old willows
    tombstone, cold alone

    Robert J. Lindley, 4-22-2018
    Haiku, ( Escaping Dreams)


    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2018
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    Time and Its Sad Afterglows

    porch swing, one old dog
    green pasture and fallen barn
    dawn's light, empty house

    Robert J. Lindley, 6-11-2018
    Haiku
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    Is this Haiku?

    Mother Nature


    Eagle soars above
    Bobcat chases jackrabbit
    Life in the desert




    Sassylady
    June 11, 2018
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    Quote Originally Posted by SassyLady View Post
    Is this Haiku?

    Mother Nature


    Eagle soars above
    Bobcat chases jackrabbit
    Life in the desert




    Sassylady
    June 11, 2018
    Not only is that a Haiku, but it is also a top class Haiku.
    One accepted and written in English form , which by definition does not meet the strictest form that the Japanese use.
    I use the exact same form as you just did my very talented friend.
    This shows that your poetic talent is definitely top class level and in my opinion you should write more, as it is a gift one should share with the world...


    A traditional Japanese haiku is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables, written in a 5/7/5 syllable count. Often focusing on images from nature, haiku emphasizes simplicity, intensity, and directness of expression.

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    Haiku: Poetic Form | Academy of American Poets
    https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/haiku-poetic-form
    A traditional Japanese haiku is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables, written in a 5/7/5 syllable count. Often focusing on images from nature, haiku emphasizes simplicity, intensity, and directness of expression.


    Haiku began in thirteenth-century Japan as the opening phrase of renga, an oral poem, generally 100 stanzas long, which was also composed syllabically. The much shorter haiku broke away from renga in the sixteenth-century, and was mastered a century later by Matsuo Basho, who wrote this classic haiku:

    An old pond!
    A frog jumps in—
    the sound of water.

    Among the greatest traditional haiku poets are Basho, Yosa Buson, Kobayashi Issa, and Masaoka Shiki. Modern poets interested in the form include Robert Hass, Paul Muldoon, and Anselm Hollo, whose poem “5 & 7 & 5” includes the following stanza:

    round lumps of cells grow
    up to love porridge later
    become The Supremes

    Haiku was traditionally written in the present tense and focused on associations between images. There was a pause at the end of the first or second line, and a “season word," or kigo, specified the time of year.

    As the form has evolved, many of these rules—including the 5/7/5 practice—have been routinely broken. However, the philosophy of haiku has been preserved: the focus on a brief moment in time; a use of provocative, colorful images; an ability to be read in one breath; and a sense of sudden enlightenment and illumination.

    This philosophy influenced poet Ezra Pound, who noted the power of haiku’s brevity and juxtaposed images. He wrote, “The image itself is speech. The image is the word beyond formulated language.” The influence of haiku on Pound is most evident in his poem “In a Station of the Metro," which began as a thirty-line poem, but was eventually pared down to two:

    The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
    Petals on a wet, black bough.
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    Thank you!

    Instinct


    Child is crying, hurt
    Maternal instinct, running
    Kisses and hugs, love

    SassyLady
    June 12, 2018
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    Reflections

    blood stained, long sharp knife
    apple pie smell, window sill
    snow covered forest

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-07-2018
    Haiku, ( a cool Spring day)



    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2018
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    Hi Tyr ... just tried to send you a PM. Looks like you'll need to have a bit of a clearout before I'm able to, though !

    Best wishes .....
    It's That Bloody Foreigner Again !!!

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    For new contest--

    Captcha is -- AEH


    HAIKU AEH
    apples, red in sun
    evening's pallid shadows
    horseshoe prints, old barn

    my log in captcha was, AEH

    Robert J. Lindley

    Haiku
    August 8, 2018


    Syllable count 5,7,5, checked by,
    https://www.howmanysyllables.com/

    Haiku Captcha contest sponsored by Harry Horsman

    Contest requirements-
    Contest Description
    What to Submit?


    1 original, poem on the theme of .your login captcha.....and use the figures in order for the beginning of each line. If there is a number or three use the letter ---7=s, 8=e etc. The only exception is the letter x, which i'm making a wild card figure, in other words any letter, you choose. But the title must contain the x, as an example all title must be haiku abc or haiku wxx, haiku 123 which would become, ott, so what ever the captcha is must follow the title haiku, you need only put the date at the bottom of the poem,,,Oh and by the way, i'm relying on your honesty, to use the first captcha of your log in , Try and stay as original as possible to the true concept of the haiku, but i am flexible somewhat on borderline..This is my first contest for 5 years, I won't go in to reason why...Harry
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    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 08-07-2018 at 10:30 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Deep Views

    shovel, one small hole
    rooftop view, ants far below
    Forest, giant trees

    Robert J. Lindley, 4-26-2018
    Haiku, (Things Felt and Seen)

    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2018
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    Children dodge raindrops

    Men get rained on.

    Both get wet.

    Who is the wiser?

    The children are tired and wet. Old men are just wt.
    “When bad men combine, the good must associate; else they will fall, one by one, an unpitied sacrifice in a contemptible struggle.” Edumnd Burke

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    Where Light and Dark Part

    windows, light fading
    bright altar set to atone
    dusty red crossroads

    Robert J. Lindley, 6-17-2018
    Haiku, ( Appearances and Deceptions)
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    Bright Summer Morn

    ancient hammer
    silent owl in old barn loft
    children fast asleep

    Robert J. Lindley, 2-27-2019
    Haiku

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    Summer At Lakeside Cottage

    ravishing dessert
    mud puddles on the dirt road
    old picnic basket

    Haiku
    Robert J. Lindley, 3-16-2019
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 03-16-2019 at 05:02 PM.
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    As The World Turns

    dawn's break, fallen bird
    sunset, distant hills aglow
    midnight news report

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    Looking Ahead With A Much Keener Eye

    forest, empty gun
    fast horse, old broken saddle
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    Life’s harsh dealing
    Our hearts’ compassion giving
    Warrior standing

    -for Robert
    After the game, the king and the pawn go into the same box - Author unknown

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