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Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
09-25-2023, 11:07 AM
Needing A Dark Cave To Hide Sorrows In


Again, this silence
between
me, myself
and I
begins a low
purr
and a striking hit
then
its vengeance
rubs the needle
and this
heart
knows
the
epic pains
dark
world
runs away
into ethereal
mists
invisible
colors
eat
into crying bones
but soul
knows
this
is due
to somebody
else
that
lives in
sin



I am
just a victim
of
imagination
and a desperate
broken
heart
seeking
a dark
cave
to hide
my
depressions

Robert J. Lindley - Verse
date = long, long ago

AHZ
09-25-2023, 12:22 PM
Again, this silence
between
me, myself
and I
begins a low
purr
and a striking hit
then
its vengeance
rubs the needle
and this
heart
knows
the
epic pains
dark
world
runs away
into ethereal
mists
invisible
colors
eat
into crying bones
but soul
knows
this
is due
to somebody
else
that
lives in
sin
I am
just a victim
of
imagination
and a desperate
broken
heart
seeking
a dark
cave
to hide
my
depressions

do you need another cup of coffee?


did a dog bite your dick off?

NightTrain
09-25-2023, 12:48 PM
do you need another cup of coffee?


did a dog bite your dick off?


That'll be another 24, my vile little cabellero.

Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
10-08-2023, 10:32 AM
Needing A Dark Cave To Hide Sorrows In


Again, this silence
between
me, myself
and I
begins a low
purr
and a striking hit
then
its vengeance
rubs the needle
and this
heart
knows
the
epic pains
dark
world
runs away
into ethereal
mists
invisible
colors
eat
into crying bones
but soul
knows
this
is due
to somebody
else
that
lives in
sin



I am
just a victim
of
imagination
and a desperate
broken
heart
seeking
a dark
cave
to hide
my
depressions

Robert J. Lindley - Verse
date = long, long ago

Thanks NT, at least one person saw something in this composition.
Most people do not know what courage it sometimes takes, to admit secret thoughts to this dark world.
A poet must face that wall and overcome it. Even if not for self, then do so for others that your words my in some way help. --God bless you, my friend.